During this past week in Independent Study and Mentorship, I began to add more dialogue lines for my character Sam to make them seem more important to the film because it was a little awkward at the end of the original script. I gave Sam some lines about how they were in the same position as Bella and how they overcame this. They give some helpful ideas to Bella and give Bella a place to stay for the holidays if she gets lonely.
Also during this past week, I got feedback on my digital portfolio from my mentor and he gave me a lot of good feedback on how to improve my digital portfolio. Lots of the advice were ways to make my digital portfolio flow better like instead of having some links go from the website to a pdf it just goes to another page on the website.
For this next coming week in Independent Study and Mentorship, I hope to film another scene of my short film, the scene in particular that I want to film is the other part of the flashback scene because it has so much emotion and tension in it. I want to get that scene completed and edited because that is one of the most important scenes that can change how impactful this short film is.
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